-Wasted Time-

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2013/01/22 13:30:59 (permalink)

-Wasted Time-

All,
 
Here is another on for your consideration, an original.  I recorded this a few months ago.
Good bad or ugly, what do you think?
 
https://soundcloud.com/smallspacessound/wasted-time
 
Sorry for the multiple posts.  In bed sick today and a bit bored and always looking for feedback to make the next project better...
 
Thank you!

Brian
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    Lynn
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    Re:-Wasted Time- 2013/01/22 13:55:36 (permalink)
    I'm writing this as I listen to your song, and I'm hearing more sound from the left channel than the right.  As I said about your other song, I would like to hear the panning spread out which would open up your mix and make each individual instrument more easily heard.  The lead vocal on this song gets lost here and there because of the narrow panning.  It's a good song, and with care, it could be a stellar mix.

    All the best,
    Lynn

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    Doosie
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    Re:-Wasted Time- 2013/01/22 14:37:33 (permalink)
    Thank You Lynn,

    I am going to try and work out a way to solve this stereo issue (see the prior thread for the reasons if you didn't already read it). I expect it runs through my entire portfolio. I will be back for some more suggestions after I do some figuring/experimenting on how to make it better.
    Upon thinking about it, it is kind of funny how much of the feedback I get (here or elsewhere) could be related to this but was mistakenly pinpointed elsewhere....  Just my own food for thought.
    I really appeciate the feedback.

    Brian
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    Lynn
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    Re:-Wasted Time- 2013/01/22 16:27:41 (permalink)
    I rarely say this, but a good VU meter could help here.  After I heard the imbalance, I could see it on my meter, so you might give that a consideration.

    All the best,
    Lynn

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    Doosie
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    Re:-Wasted Time- 2013/01/22 17:35:49 (permalink)
    Lynn


    I rarely say this, but a good VU meter could help here.  After I heard the imbalance, I could see it on my meter, so you might give that a consideration.


    Again, Thank you Lynn.

    Brian
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