Starise
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When Charity Smiles
Here is a new one of mine. I personified a thing (Charity) with a name to describe it, so the song is about "her". FWIW, I didn't forget about that other song and I appreciate all of your comments. I'm just taking awhile to get it completely mixed....so thank you to all who commented on it. https://soundcloud.com/starise/when-charity-smiles When Charity Smiles c2014 Tim Smith When Charity Smiles When Charity smiles, rain and wind all go away, when Charity smiles it's gonna be a brand new day. When Charity smiles she drives the shadows all away,when Charity smiles, I know we'll make it all the way. She lets her light shine, she lets her light shine, She does not envy, does not boast,seeks the good in me the most, Keeps no journal of wrongs I've done, seeks the good for everyone Charity smile, Charity smile Charity smiles,Charity smiles,Charity smiles,Charity smiles,Charity smiles,Charity smiles it makes everything alright- Charity smiles When Charity smiles I feel her kindness all around,when Charity smiles, it touches all who look her way, She lets her light shine, she lets her light shine,she lets her light shine in- repeat
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Re: When Charity Smiles
2014/08/02 21:06:23
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You are pumping the tracks out. This is another feel good tune. Once again most enjoyable.
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Starise
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Re: When Charity Smiles
2014/08/06 10:40:15
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This was another remix..bumped for further comment....and thanks Gus!!
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Re: When Charity Smiles
2014/08/06 11:09:12
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Nice song. I like the vocalist - clear, clean and not really pitchy... is that you?
Mix-wise, I'd bring up the drums a tad, and also the bass. The whole mix lacks in the bottom end.
Are these live drums? The intro is a little busy. And the timing floats around a little. But overall you've got some good basics to start with. Good work!
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Lynn
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Re: When Charity Smiles
2014/08/06 12:33:55
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Tim, this is a fun song to listen to. The lyrics and arrangement are clever, and overall, the song is a joy to hear. I like your vocal in this! Your songwriting has managed to stay fresh, though you have a certain style that I call "Starise" which is undeniably you. Well done!
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Starise
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Re: When Charity Smiles
2014/08/07 08:01:11
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Ruben- Yes the vocals are me. I I have made some more adjustments last night to this, hopefully cleared up a few things.Thanks for listening!
Lynn- I'm really glad to see you back here! Thanks for your comments. You're a great mixer and I appreciate your insights.
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Makke
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Re: When Charity Smiles
2014/08/07 09:23:15
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well done.. enjoyable song.. good vocals and sounds
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Re: When Charity Smiles
2014/08/07 13:28:49
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Re: When Charity Smiles
2014/08/07 14:00:06
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Very good song , I like it …nice message and energy
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Re: When Charity Smiles
2014/08/08 08:59:29
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I posted on this last night, but looks like the forum gremlins ate it. Anyway, I wanted to say that this is probably one of my favorites that I've heard from you Tim. Love the melody and vocals and the whole thing comes together really well. I think the bass and kick could use a boost, and the drums could stand a little more definition, but all in all, I really like this one. Reminds me of an old band called Starcastle, which I'm sure you've never heard of, but you would like them I'll wager.
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Guitarpima
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Re: When Charity Smiles
2014/08/08 18:14:17
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I like the song as well. I'm sticking with my Foreigner meets Firefall comment. Great stuff!
I think the mix has to much mid in it.
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Re: When Charity Smiles
2014/08/12 15:34:26
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Another good song! Catchy, and nice harmonies once again. Some of them are just a little off-time so perhaps a little slide here and there? As Guitarpima mentioned the mids/high-mids do seem to have a lot going on, particularly when the guitars come in. So it's a little bright I think, but not really harsh. Then again, given the context bright could be the right thing. 
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