Where will I be - my latest track

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2011/05/18 18:21:28 (permalink)

Where will I be - my latest track

Hey guys

This is my latest track, it's called "where will I be." I started making it today and it's really just fallen together really nicely. I hope you like it and I'd be very happy to have any feedback both good or bad. It's not quite finished yet, because I haven't written any lyrics yet, also I will probably make one or two more small adjustments. But hopefully I'll be able to write some good words and find a really good singer, and then it will be complete :)

http://soundcloud.com/use...here-will-i-be-work-in

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    logan86
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    Re:Where will I be - my latest track 2011/05/18 19:06:53 (permalink)
    Also I failed to mention before that I am looking for a vocalist as well. So if you are a vocalist and you're interested then please let me know because I'm really excited to take this project to the next level and it would be really cool to work with someone :)

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    Re:Where will I be - my latest track 2011/05/19 04:07:03 (permalink)
    not really my genre but it clearly needs a lead melody (presumably the vocals!) i like the ostinato bell/clavinet sound. the track builds up well. not sure about the choice of tone for the melody, kinda a bit accordian-ny. Needs some kinda bass to drive it along i think. Will look out for the finished version!

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    Re:Where will I be - my latest track 2011/05/19 09:05:16 (permalink)
    Perky little track.

    It will sound very nice with vocals.

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    Re:Where will I be - my latest track 2011/05/19 11:00:17 (permalink)
    Pretty nice track with good arrangement and transitional hooks.  I think it could work without the vocals, but I would select another synth solo.  Without much bass give it an alternative feel. 

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    Re:Where will I be - my latest track 2011/05/19 11:10:28 (permalink)
    Hey guys. Thanks for your comments and suggestions. At the moment I am thinking that the vocals will flesh out a lot of the melody, and I don't want to make the same mistake as in Tokyo night with too much of a crowded sound. But Vechung, what did you mean by selecting another synth solo? Do you mean that it doesn't have enough bass? Thanks again for your feedback :)
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    Re:Where will I be - my latest track 2011/05/20 09:54:43 (permalink)
    Sorry for my bad writing.  I mean another synth sound.  The melody is great.  Also without much bass could be a good thing because you are now a bit different. 

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    Re:Where will I be - my latest track 2011/05/20 10:55:27 (permalink)
    Oh I see. Well I will try out some other synth sounds then for sure. I think I settled on that one too quickly maybe. It sounded good so I just stuck with it without exploring any other possibilities too much. As for the bass, or lack of it, I'm glad that I have done something which makes my music a bit different. It's nice to feel like I've made something a bit unique :)
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    Re:Where will I be - my latest track 2011/05/20 13:45:57 (permalink)
    Nice bed for some vocals or lead instrument.  The flute like melody line just sounds to plastic to me, there is no movement in the voice.

    Thanks for sharing will keep an eye out for the finished product.

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