With Feathers - Julibee (Folktronica?)

I've been working on this for several weeks, I and THINK I've gotten the mix where I want it.  Seemed like SUCH a good idea to have a full-on Julianna Choir at the time.... Hard to tame that beast.  Yikes.
 
Anyway.  I've never been very comfortable with my mixing skills, namely that I've never really EQ'd anything, because I simply didn't know what needed it and/or how to get it to sound as I wanted it.  I found THIS GUIDE to mixing (electronica specific) the other day, and clickety-click, stuff started making sense.
 
So this song is what I was working on when I started reading.
 
I didn't mix it traditionally, nor do I want to - but I do want to know what some of my more traditional friends think, and from that standpoint how I might improve it. 
 
There are lots of loops here (I made them, though - they aren't pulled from some CD or downloaded) which you may or may not appreciate. 
 
Lyrics available at SoundCloud.  Lyrics, Music, Production - Me.
 
With Feathers on Soundcloud