"Your Spell" Jazz Ballad Style Original

I don't listen to jazz but this sounded good.

It was a mistake to put this up. I'm sorry.
Is the singing really that bad?

 
Not a mistake to put this up. I get the feeling the whole point of this place is for people to share what they are trying to do!
 
The song has some interesting chords, some remind me of Rachmaninoff! and the arrangement is pretty together.
 
I'm not a good enough vocalist to criticise, but I can tell you might want to take some of the huuuuuuuge leaps out of the melody line. Too large are the interval jumps, they would make even a great singer nervous. If you are in love with the melody you've got here, then sing it twelve times and select the best bits and cobble it all together (a.k.a. "comping") . . . then do it all again for the double track. Add reverb to taste. Voila!
 
But I think the melody line could stand some revising to get rid of the leaps across the Grand Canyon of intervals.
 
nice job, thanks for the share!
 
-Tom

I agree with emerald. It would be a greater mistake to not post. Feedback is so important, even if you disagree you still think.  

Yes, take input from others, without complaining? I found out how to turn off PMs Yeah! So regardless of how bad it sucks? Post it, and look for feedback. It can always be improved, especially in certain cases (Ssssshhhhh this one...)

Well... There are many "very" talented people here? But there are many, and yes, sometimes if you need improvement? Someone may point that out? So either grow a thicker skin? Or practice? The choice is yours ;-) **Please note, "Neither" is not an option?
 
I'm thinking a thicker skin is probably best for you? But there's still hope if you practice, and there's always Melodyne?  Don't give up yet!

Thank you for accepting your limitations. They are many, and varied. The truth can be an evil and unforgiving mistress. However, she can also be a gentle lover if you get to know her? I propose that you invite her to dinner...
 
Once you begin a dialog? Who knows where it will go from there? What is important is to remember, "we can all be better?" All of us. And to begin with a point of view that, "Here it is, it's the best I can do, and it damn well better be good enough!" 
 
Well, it's a bad place from which to start? (not saying that's where you started)
 
I personally am not a mixing or mastering guru, there are many here? What is important is to accept that we're all "here" and we're all trying to get to "there" And the sooner you accept that you're "here" and trying to get "there" the better off you'll be, everyone can improve? All of us.
 
Very few are "there..." We speak their names in hushed tones...
 
But it's best to accept that most of us suck? And could use improvement. And all advice is not good, but some of it is?

I did not get a chance to hear your posted song - but just wanted to encourage you to post your efforts here - some feedback will be constructive and some will be not so much.  My advice would be to take from it what helps, and ignore what does not.
 
Bob Bone