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2014/09/13 13:13:26 (permalink)

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http://www.reverbnation.com/johnmarquette/song/21792018-number-one
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    Re: any constructive criticism is appreciated 2014/09/13 14:10:09 (permalink)
    Sounds reasonable enough here, perhaps a little too stereo in places, if you get my drift.
     
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    Re: any constructive criticism is appreciated 2014/09/13 18:09:03 (permalink)
    Heh Heh Wookiee said stereo and drift in one sentence.
     
    Small crit the BGV's seem a tad too loud.
     
    Other than that, sounds pretty good.
     
    If it were me mixing; I would pan the guitars more and center ALL the vox more. But I'm a dunderhead and fall prey to the norm.

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    Re: any constructive criticism is appreciated 2014/09/13 18:10:03 (permalink)
    Forgot to mention.
     
    The drums are stellar.
     

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    Re: any constructive criticism is appreciated 2014/09/15 14:30:02 (permalink)
    Stereo over-separation aside, it sounds good here - nice mix.  

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    Re: any constructive criticism is appreciated 2014/09/20 23:42:56 (permalink)
    Sounds good to me!  I like the song.  Maybe the guitar could have been a bit more up front.  Less reverb?  I don't know. That could just be me.   OOPS!!! I was listening to the second song (Number One).  The first song (Forget The Rest) is really good.  Somehow your song titles in my parentheses are a bit comical. The instrument mix, well the whole thing was tighter.  I really liked it.  No crits to give.  Tight!!!!

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    Re: any constructive criticism is appreciated 2014/09/21 09:22:12 (permalink)
    Hi!
     
    I think the song sounds very good. Catchy melodies. Many musical segments.
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