first year guitar work - but having fun anyway

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randyman
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2011/02/20 13:47:09 (permalink)

first year guitar work - but having fun anyway

Wished I knew what I was doing - mixed in a basment with plenty of natural 'verb
 
http://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=9171147
 
Any comment and critiques welcomed.
 
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    morenoise
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    Re:first year guitar work - but having fun anyway 2011/02/20 14:31:33 (permalink)
    Hi Randy, like the tune and your playing. The guitar sound could be a little less distorted imho. you could also use some finger vibrato on the longer sustaining notes.

    Greetings, Rik
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    randyman
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    Re:first year guitar work - but having fun anyway 2011/02/22 23:51:13 (permalink)
    thanks for the feedback - I'll keep that in mind!

    A rack of noisemakers is not a definitive substitute for creativity. (though it does seem to help)

    what I spend my lunch time doing:  (don't laugh - its just for fun!) www.soundclick.com/rnewburn

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    Scottytunes
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    Re:first year guitar work - but having fun anyway 2011/02/23 07:25:08 (permalink)
    First year, eh? Great job! Two thumbs up!  

    String Jammer
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    giankap
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    Re:first year guitar work - but having fun anyway 2011/02/23 07:43:00 (permalink)
    very nice tune. you could use the wheel much more on the guitar synth so it could sound more realistic. and also don't be afraid to move some notes slightly in time. remember: even the perfect guitarist can't be so accurate on time. the mix is good overall!

    sincerely,

    Ioannis

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