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2014/09/14 03:08:58 (permalink)

hello friends

Here is my new song. been working a friend of mind on this tune
hope you guys enjoy.
 
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    jamesg1213
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    Re: hello friends 2014/09/14 07:47:58 (permalink)
    That's a nice melody Tony, cool backing too. The rap sections were a little weak I thought, and  they sound too dry/upfront against the track to my ears..but I'm no expert on the genre. Your productions get better and better tho, keep it up.

     
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    Re: hello friends 2014/09/15 14:35:56 (permalink)
    As Starise wrote on SC - nice clean mix.   I do agree with James though that the rap sections are a bit thin and up front.  Perhaps a doubled vocal and a bit of saturation might happen fatten them up?
     

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    Re: hello friends 2014/09/25 12:50:51 (permalink)
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    As Starise wrote on SC - nice clean mix.   I do agree with James though that the rap sections are a bit thin and up front.  Perhaps a doubled vocal and a bit of saturation might happen fatten them up?
     


    Im working on it I decided to take the rap part out because im no longer friends with the rapper.
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    Re: hello friends 2014/09/25 19:29:31 (permalink)
    The link isn't working for me, Tony.  I'll try later.

    All the best,
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    Re: hello friends 2014/09/25 23:32:50 (permalink)
    I like melody. The rap should be really edgy maybe like sounding like it comes from a telephone.
    Don't worry about your spelling. There's a lot of us that aren't so good at it.

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    Re: hello friends 2014/09/26 11:08:28 (permalink)
    Your stuff is nice.  Nicely mixed and great stereo separation.  Nice use of delays.  Good job!

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    Re: hello friends 2014/09/26 11:46:46 (permalink)
    Tony, your mixing skills have improved so much that you are getting your message out - loud and clear.  At some point it becomes like judging cooking;  how many herbs and spices to add to a mix becomes a matter of personal taste.  I like the suggestion to differentiate the rap part so that it stands out from the rest of the song, but if you left it as is, I would have no problem with that.  The good part is that we are now able to hear your songwriting skills so much better and are able to hear your vision.

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