hello friends

That's a nice melody Tony, cool backing too. The rap sections were a little weak I thought, and  they sound too dry/upfront against the track to my ears..but I'm no expert on the genre. Your productions get better and better tho, keep it up.

stevec
As Starise wrote on SC - nice clean mix.   I do agree with James though that the rap sections are a bit thin and up front.  Perhaps a doubled vocal and a bit of saturation might happen fatten them up?
 

Im working on it I decided to take the rap part out because im no longer friends with the rapper.

I like melody. The rap should be really edgy maybe like sounding like it comes from a telephone.
Don't worry about your spelling. There's a lot of us that aren't so good at it.

Tony, your mixing skills have improved so much that you are getting your message out - loud and clear.  At some point it becomes like judging cooking;  how many herbs and spices to add to a mix becomes a matter of personal taste.  I like the suggestion to differentiate the rap part so that it stands out from the rest of the song, but if you left it as is, I would have no problem with that.  The good part is that we are now able to hear your songwriting skills so much better and are able to hear your vision.