illerill - Voices From Within [explicit lyrics]

Info:

Yet to be mastered, but everything else is done.

Download/stream:

Zshare: Illerill - Voices from within .mp3 - 4.46MB
Usershare: Illerill - Voices from within .mp3 - 4.5 Mb
Myspace: http://www.myspace.com/illerill1

Lyrics:

I was told it was impossible, was pretending it's not
Now I've passed most of the obstacles, ascending the top
A sentence extending the plot, I always thought it was logical
I'm a thinker by nature, always been best friends with hip hop
I know people they want me but in between us there's an army
keeping the road to success guarded, I can hardly reach out
It's ****ed, what's making me strong, is also what harms me
The only melody I ride to is my heart's beat, it's hard, see
The industry is sinking down with our nation
Cuz you cannot sing about human rights violations
Freedom of speech doesn't exist on radio stations
Fame and elation rappers falling' one by one for the temptations
They'll have huge mansions and luxury cars
I'll be watchin' porno, they be ****in' the stars
But the buck isn't all, they'll be learning their lesson
Even with infinite money the world is depressin'


My art descends deep down from my heart and then are sent
light speed to my brain's core where the parts are bent
My thoughts then send orders to my mouth and hence
You hear my voice over the beat, droppin' bars again (x2)


I've traveled in time, I've unraveled my mind
If I can't express myself by text, well then I've had it with life
Rappers drop lines, perplexed ****, with no adjectives like
They're emotionless then compare their **** to my radical rhymes
I aint mad all the time, but I sure aint happy with life
**** lil wayne, why they give cash to the wackiest guys?
Why does some say that pac is alive? He was wacked, yeah he died
We need a change but pac packed his bag and wont come back to the fight
We need to open our eyes, unite the black and the white
We in the midst of a war with those attacking our rights
On feminist ****es who don't want no sexual business
We're in an age of darkness and I'm pulling the switches
Business is business, I understand, I'd sell my soul too
If I could to the dollar, the penny, the whole crew
But **** it I can't, now this man got a hard walk
To the charts where the stars are cuz I let my heart talk


My art descends deep down from my heart and then are sent
light speed to my brain's core where the parts are bent
My thoughts then send orders to my mouth and hence
You hear my voice over the beat, droppin' bars again (x2)

Outstanding. Really enjoyed that.

Cheers
Shad

Paul Russell


mm, not sure what I'm clicking on there. How about hosting it on some reputable sites.

Zshare is a very common hosting site.

I'll have a listen when it's on a streaming site like Soundclick. I don't like download sites.

Guys... you really need to pay attention better

Both sites are streaming...

And this is still a great song.

The beats are great. The stereo keyboard flourishes that come and go are so hot, though, that the tune sounds kinda thin and empty after they leave. Liek there is more to the spectrum then we are hearing.

The vocals: not sure about them. Your flow is good, good attitude, though there were a couple of tricky phrases that you got somewhat lost with. But the whole "crowd of Ills"  approach to the raps kinda robs me of the lyrical drive. Too many Ills, not sure who is in the lead. Either make them so bedrock-tight that it sounds like one guy, or go in the other direction, and just do a single track. 

Of course it is subjective, Shad. Since when is there "right and wrong" in music criticism? I said it "kinda robs me"...And why don't you think the beats are great?

Umm, what was dumb, exactly?