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  • I was BORN with A GUN in MY Hand (p.2)
2017/07/23 13:44:23
jamesg1213
I think this is your best yet Jesse, love the rhythm made up of all those diverse sounds and that bass is just filthy groovy!
 
 
2017/07/23 17:53:19
eph221
Yes, and Jesse played the part remarkably well.
2017/07/23 19:44:30
eph221
Serious_Noize!
I did not like it at all.......... 
 




 
I took it as pastiche.  I thought it was clever.
2017/07/23 22:09:26
Serious_Noize!
I apologize Jesse Q, Screed, your right about the content, it upset me at the time and I was out of line. Music sounds great in my opinion, I just didn't like the content of the lyrics and took it a bit too personal.  
 
I apologize. 
2017/07/23 22:50:33
Serious_Noize!
eph221
Serious_Noize!
I did not like it at all.......... 
 




 
I took it as pastiche.  I thought it was clever.




I did not like the content of the words, people have mothers and daughters and sisters and making a song about WOMEN beating is not a good thing. 
So you basically are saying other peoples opinions do not matter and you are smarter than all of us here eh?
 
Meaning when someone post a song the listeners do not matter at all? Or that is a criminal is PASTICHE? Big words do not equate to intelligence. Just saying. People want to be entertained by songs, not thrown into a big bunch of BS drama. Just being PASTICHE you might say. 
 
Just my opinion....... Good Day....... 
 
2017/07/23 22:58:09
eph221
No, just smarter than you apparently
2017/07/23 23:02:52
Serious_Noize!
eph221
No, just smarter than you apparently




No, you didn't upset me, I upset you. TROLL......... 
 
2017/07/24 00:00:38
bitflipper
Once you get past the green color, pastiche is actually a very pleasant flavor of ice cream.
 
Let's play nice, folks. Sometimes a smart-ass comment strikes others as funny, sometimes it doesn't. Either way, let it slide. For the record, I didn't care for the song either. But I still gotta give it props for originality!
2017/07/24 05:44:36
kennywtelejazz
OK , in all honesty I have mixed feelings about this tune .
On the positive side , it is nice to hear that your branching out , taking risks and writing according to what you are looking to express musically ...
On the flip side the writing style is somewhat light , misogynistic,  and I take offence to you even comparing this to Hey Joe ..
it's not even close ...but hey , in the end , if it's all about progress and not perfection , then you are making good ground in your music 
 
all the best,
 
Kenny
 
2017/07/24 13:20:04
Jesse Screed
Well, there I go again. 
 
Hey Serious Noize, there is no need to apologize. However, for what it is worth, I accept it. I respect your honesty, but again, I didn't take your response in a negative way.  The song is of a violent nature, that much is true.  I don't like the subject matter either, but unfortunately there are aspects of our reality that are very much in line with this subject.  To me, this is more like a cable news sound byte.  Not condoning, or promoting, just pointing out.  So, thanks for the opportunity to converse with you.  "Successful conversation will take you very far."
 
As to the rest of it, this is going to sound superficial, but I try not to get into arguments over the internet.  I say what I say, do what I do, try not to incite outrage, and let people express their natures as they wish.  I already have a world of hurt surrounding me, no need to wade into the deep water here. 
 
Oh, and Eph, I did not "play" the bass line, you probably knew that.  In fact, I didn't play anything.  I merely explored the smorgasbord provided within Sonar and heaped the choices onto my plate.  I suppose you could call that "play?" Sonar can be like a bucket full of Lego. 
 
My next song is a straight up love song, with a female vocalist!!!!!  But I will wait until this song crashes to the bottom of the page before posting it.
 
Jesse Q. Screed
 
 
 
 
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