https://soundcloud.com/da...oft-cool-kiss-of-god-2

hey eph, nice
 
I think you need to add a high trumpet to the first 23 sec and then again at 45 sec, it just seems it might fit with the attack of those other horns, like you did at 2:57.  I think the tempo at 1:06 needs to be slowed down a bit. until 1:30.  I would also revisit the intro sooner, say at 2:34, over what you have there already.
 
That what I got, nice ambitious piece.
 
compose jose
 
Jesse Q.Screed
 
 

Jesse, I am highly honored that you took the time to listen.  I'll take your thoughts into consideration.  There's also a really nasty violin patch in there that I have to nuke.  Take Care!

I couldn't begin to write something like this. Very nice mood piece, uplifting without being pushy about it. Nice stuff!

excellent David - I really enjoyed this. I agree with Kevin above - very uplifting

Thanks Daryl!  I think the kiss is just a peck in this instance. :D:D

Very nice indeed David!  Thanks for posting
 

Thanks kev.  

thanks for listening Freddy.

Hey David - very interesting!  your music has such different styles, you're very "versatile" in that!
 
I like the addition of the low horns at about 2 and the tension at about 2:35 and on.  good stuff!