Not bad. Retro, but not bad. One thing I believe
might improve the mix would be an instance of TP Basslane on the master bus. Just whack it on there with the default settings. The bass sounds a little smeared off center to me - TP Basslane does a great job of solidifying the bottom end.
EDIT: Of course it would help if I posted this on the song itself instead of the snarky Coffee House thread about the song. LOL! The internet is soooo confusing...I pine for the days when you could only have one page open at once.