Regardless of who is chasing who around, and what they're wearing, this is a good piece of music. Mix-wise you are getting the hang of it. Not a kilt joke.
If there is a step wrong, I'd say it's the use of that famous piano arpeggio. Maybe muck it up a little so it's not a friggin' exact copy of Color My World. Don't kilt the originality. Yes, a kilt joke.
Unless you are paying homage, then anything goes.
nice one, keep 'em coming!
-Tom