Terrific song Mike.  Great performance by all and lyrics that deserve to be heard.  My only suggestion would be similar to Ed's (above).  On my ill-performing speakers, the guitar panned right is really sounding loud.  The vocal levels are probably good but that guitar might be competing with them too much.  Just a thought ---- but then again, what do I know?
 
Nice one - very nice indeed!

Lynn and Freddy- Thank you both for listening.  Based on both your comments being very similar, I have gone ahead and lowered the guitar on the right a little more in this mix.  Hopefully, that is enough for the vocal to be more prominent in this mix.  

Hey Jerry Garcia!!! Bring that vocal forward even more please!!!
 
I would also vote for a slight reduction in volume of the hi hat/cymbals, they are a culprit in masking the vocal. For fun, play your tune with those high sparkly things muted - does the vocal pop out nicely?
 
cool tune.
 
cheers,
-Tom

Thanks guys so far for the great comments!  I enjoyed working with the guys on this song (as I do EVERY song we do!)  this was a great song of Mike's that came together really nicely.  I absolutely love the lead guitar Sean did in this!
 
I know Mike is taking your comments seriously and we're all discussing them and he's made some changes already so far!
 
thanks again everyone!

This is one of the best vocal productions I have heard from you guys, the mix works well here thanks for sharing.

Bless you Wookie!
 
I consider myself the least of the 3 vocalist's in the Band.  That comment means very much to me.  Hopefully, I've got the mix levels right this time.  

emeraldsoul
Hey Jerry Garcia!!! Bring that vocal forward even more please!!!

 
Hey Tom, not being a Dead fan....I'm not sure that I understand the Garcia reference.  Hopefully, I have this one figured out this time around.  
 
I went through each instrument and muted them, one by one, trying to determine what might be masking the Lead Vocal.  When I turned off the electric rhythm in the right speaker, the Lead Vocal was crystal clear.  So, I have gone in and done some volume automation with that guitar around the vocals.