I think the effects on the lead vocal are smearing the lyrics a bit too much. It's a cool sound, and I think sounds good on the non-verbal singing, but I'd like the lead vocal to come through more clearly. This has a strong Howard Jones feel, though modernized.
The other thing that I wasn't crazy about was the way the song starts and stops so much. I was looking for a longer section of development that never came.
It's definitely worth development as it has a cool vibe overall.
Regards,
Dan