I agree with esoul, the upfront vocals are nice. Very good lyrics. Borderline R&B. Definitely a well crafted song, top notch.
I have no real opinion on the landr vs you mixes. the drums were a bit more defined on the landr, but I think that could be fixed on your own. What kit is that?
I did notice at 3:34 or so the vocals were mixed way up, and then they go back down. Did you notice that or is it just me? Neverthemore, a masterful song and great production.
Jesse Q. Screed