It's not mastered yet, but this is the first track from an album I'm working on.
My first attempt at a "storyline" song, and mostly a true story.  Any critiques, comments, or suggestions?
 
PS.  If BayouBill is looking for another crazy lady, this muse is probably still available...
 
 
https://soundcloud.com/user-809364146/not-my-song
 
Recorded in Sonar Platinum.  Drums are Addictive Drums, bass and guitars are real but run through Ampeg SVX and Amplitube, horns are NI Session Horns.  I can't remember which piano synth I used.

it's a well crafted song, and you kept interesting things happening throughout.  Reminded me a little of late 70's punk songs but done more mello.

Thanks Eph!
I hadn't heard much 70s punk in it, but there's definitely some in my background.  I guess you can't wash it away with age. 

Shameless bump.  Anyone else listen to it?
I tried hard to make a 3-chord song evolve.  It started out as a slow blues track, went into Klezmer when I wrote that first lead guitar line as a trumpet, then went to reggae, then finally back to what it turned out to be.

Nice sorta 60's punkabilly vibe happening.  
 
Everything sounds about right to me, and I liked the live feel but with everything still in its place.  And the half-tempo change at the end was a nice touch.