Thanks for the comments, I really appreciate them.
I was pretty sure someone would say it's too repetitious (which I think it is, a little bit) and was thinking about reworking it to have one less chorus, and a proper bridge, to break up the repetition.
But anyway, thanks for listening and for the feedback! And thanks to Melodyne, without it, my vocals would really be unbearable. Which is why I always jump to Auto-Tune's defense whenever non-musicians, (who don't understand the correct usage of pitch correction software) say that it's one of the main causes of modern music's downfall.