Hi friendly forum folk
Here's a song I wrote and recorded.
I was going for a robotic/over melodyned sound in the verses 
Nits and crits welcome.
https://soundcloud.com/sk...l-all-be-ok-in-the-end
 
It'll All Be Ok In The End
Written and recorded by Staypress
Backing vocals by Elizabeth Greenway
Ch 1
It'll all be ok in the end
Keep telling yourself my friend
The President's tweeting and his honesty's fleeting
It'll all be ok in the end
V1
They said 'no point in complaining, could be worse could be raining'
I think I'll bury my head
But they said 'stand up and be counted' but it never amounted to anything
Prechorus
I hope you're comfy in your 'free' country
Everything's ok because they told you so
Ch 2
It'll all be ok in the end
Keep telling your self my friend
Accept blind deception for WiFi reception
It'll all be ok in the end
V2
They said 'just go with the program - don't rock the boat man - don't dare to change anything'
Prechorus
I hope you're comfy in your 'free' country
Everything's ok because they told you so
Ch 3
It'll all be ok in the end
Keep telling yourself my friend
Your teenage phone zombie loves his Abercrombie
It'll all be ok in the end
V3
They said 'no point in complaining, could be worse could be raining'
I think I'll bury my head
But they said 'stand up and be counted' but it never amounted to anything
Prechorus
I hope you're comfy in your 'free' country
Everything's ok because they told you so
Ch 4
It'll all be ok in the end
Keep telling your self my friend
The President's tweeting but his honesty's fleeting
Accept blind deception for WiFi reception
Reassurance ain't easy - go and watch a bit of TV
It'll all be ok in the end
 
Thanks to John Cleese

Cracking stuff mate, turned out really well didn't it? I like the Beatle-esque touches and the radio-distortion synth swirls.
 
'Your teenage phone zombie loves his Abercrombie' - brilliant...

Bloody Brilliant, as you Brits would say!
I hope you're right; that it indeed will be OK in the end.
(at the risk of violating the TOS)
We survived 8 years of GWB, maybe it will all turn out all right.
(/TOS violation)
 
Thanks,
 
T

Daryl goes a bit socially conscious and political and the result is absolutely brilliant.  I totally loved this... zombie and Abercrombie  great job, Daryl!

Nice on you Daryk.

I like the lyrics and the cadence of the lyrics, "tweeting" and "fleeting", that robotic voice with all the swirly stuff going on. Nicely done.

Very nice Daryl and company, your usual wit, I liked you phrasing.  Worthy of a

A masterpiece.

Love everything about this! Great lyrics and...well, everything else.

jamesg1213
Cracking stuff mate, turned out really well didn't it? I like the Beatle-esque touches and the radio-distortion synth swirls.
 
'Your teenage phone zombie loves his Abercrombie' - brilliant...

Thanks so much James me old mucker.
Thanks for the ear early on too.