Great song, nice vocal and smoking guitar solo. Keep it up!

Thank you, very much :D
 
How do you have a suggestion on how to do it? I added some top to the snare, and felt like that gave it a little more snap, but maybe I should blend in some more of the compressed signal (mix knob on the compressor)?
 
- Øyvind

Strong piece, especially the vocals as already mentioned.   Overall mix sounds good, though I do agree that the snare gets a bit buried....  or maybe it just sounds "small" compared to the guitars which are nice and present.   I also liked that "turntable-y" synth line that goes throughout - nice touch!
 

This is a very good mix and arrangement -- it all comes together well.  The guitars are very nice.  The vox is also good (but a bit too emo for my taste) -- in the higher register you sound a bit like Bono which is not a bad thing.  The one thing I didn't like is the title -- that breathe theme has been done to death in pop, cod soul and country.   I enjoyed the listen -- this is good work!
 
Allan
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Yup, I can't add anything. Great song.
Wish I could sing like that!!