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  • The sound of truth
2017/06/22 04:48:16
eph221
Without music, life would be a mistake.
https://soundcloud.com/da...214/the-sound-of-truth
2017/06/22 17:18:30
jamesg1213
That's very nice David. I might back off the slap-back delay on the guitar a little (keep it but push it back a little). What guitar are you using here? I like the tone. Minimal piece, but it sounds complete.
 
Oh..lose the silence at the start, I haven't got all day..
2017/06/22 19:36:58
jonboper
I agree with jymez, that silence could be cut. If it's an album track that you're making space for, maybe make it at the end of the previous song instead. I feel like the bass gets out of balance at times during the track, but I do like the bass tone generally, is the linchpin of the song.
2017/06/23 23:12:15
eph221
Thanks for your astute observations.
2017/06/25 02:56:42
eph221
Thanks for listening.  Does the tune sound honest?
2017/06/25 03:21:06
pistolpete
Honestly, not really.
The guitar has a great tone (except for the echo). The rest of the instruments sound a bit artificial, especially the flute. However, overall the song used the theme quite well and was interesting.
2017/06/25 03:29:18
eph221
The song is a metaphor for truth.  It's interesting that you say the artificial sounding instruments wreak the metaphor.  Do I have to have a british accent to read shakespeare?  j/k.  Thanks for listening!
2017/06/25 03:47:53
pistolpete
I don't really care much for Shakespeare. However, it would be more "truthful" to be a accurate as possible, so a British accent would therefore be more honest. In philosophical terms though, one could read Shakespeare in any accent and it would be left to the individual so fabricate their own interpretation. But it's just not as good.
My feedback was based on the assumption that you were interested in the technical music aspects and not a philosophical viewpoint.
2017/06/25 05:11:50
eph221
Oh, I'm just jerkin you around.  I appreciate you lending me your ears.  Thanks!
2017/06/25 14:49:26
daryl1968
This is really nice David. It is very refreshing.
The main theme really grows on you.
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