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  • Lonely Heart (Original Song) Mix Adjusted (p.2)
2017/06/19 22:01:21
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Frugaard
Great song! Sounds good on these speakers. I really like the vocals, they fit perfectly together! Like your other songs, you manage to get some good power in the chorus, and I love it! Takes me back to my younger days when I was listening to power ballads on my discman 

Great job!
 
- Øyvind


 
Thanks Øyvind
 
I'm glad you liked it.
Yep.... I can't escape the 80s...I've tried but it's futile at this point.
2017/06/19 22:01:49
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String Jammer
Very nice all around!

Thanks String Jammer!
2017/06/19 22:08:15
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dcumpian
CSW
Hi Group,
 
Here's another song that Robin and I finished up recently.
Takes so dang long to finish these up.  
 
https://soundcloud.com/user-166430027/lonely-heart
 
Please let me know what you think about the mix and the song.
 
Thanks
Craig




I actually don't hear the country-rock reference. To me, this hearkens back to 80's Pop Rock, like Pat Benatar and Gino Vanelli (Black Cars era). The vocals sound great, as usual, maybe just a tad too far out front. Guitars are awesome. The whole thing is mixed very well!
 
And yes, they certainly do take a lot of time to finish, lol...
 
Regards,
Dan
 


 
Thanks Dan,
 
I'm wondering too, what about the song gives of a country vibe.
I remember picking up a Gino Vanelli album in 79.  I think it had "I just want to Stop" on it. That's a masterpiece... and his voice was truly amazing. The rest of the album seemed like a bunch of session musicians going thru the motions.... but they we're so far ahead of me ... musically that I couldn't play the stuff.
 
Craig
2017/06/19 22:10:31
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Mannynyagain
Sounds great to me - bass really pulls everything together. Vocals are outstanding. Very pop with a hint of country and that's your intention I'm sure. Fun song, good driving material. Like it a lot.




Thanks Mannynyagain! 
 
I do like the bass too.  I had to replay that bass part about three times to get it right. 
What about the song has a hint of country? I've lost all perspective on it.
 
Craig
2017/06/19 22:14:01
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philz
Good, solid tune and a really great job on the performances and the mix.  Could be a matter of personal taste, but I would consider backing off the compression on the vocals just a bit.  


Thank you philz,
 
You know....  I wrestle with the vocals on every song. I do have redundant compressors that I could remove from the vocal chain. I should focus more on gain staging too.
 
Craig 
2017/06/19 22:15:51
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berlymahn
Nice work.  Love the vocals and harmonies!


Thanks berlymahn!
2017/06/19 22:22:44
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Jesse Screed
Wow!
 
very nice piece.  i find the two vocals interesting, you all work well together.  nice solo on the guitar.  just really nice work, well crafted.
 
Jesse Q. Screed


Thanks Jesse,
 
Robin and I seem to be a good blend I've heard.
She's a much much better singer than I, and she's the final line of defense for when I go off on a ridiculous, trite or just bad tangent as far as singing goes.  
 
She let's me know something really sucks by using the phrase "sounds like something Debbie Boone would sing" . Pretty much nips it in the bud right there!  I instantly hit delete and never go back to that idea!
 
Craig
2017/06/20 01:35:57
dcumpian
CSW
dcumpian
CSW
Hi Group,
 
Here's another song that Robin and I finished up recently.
Takes so dang long to finish these up.  
 
https://soundcloud.com/user-166430027/lonely-heart
 
Please let me know what you think about the mix and the song.
 
Thanks
Craig




I actually don't hear the country-rock reference. To me, this hearkens back to 80's Pop Rock, like Pat Benatar and Gino Vanelli (Black Cars era). The vocals sound great, as usual, maybe just a tad too far out front. Guitars are awesome. The whole thing is mixed very well!
 
And yes, they certainly do take a lot of time to finish, lol...
 
Regards,
Dan
 


 
Thanks Dan,
 
I'm wondering too, what about the song gives of a country vibe.
I remember picking up a Gino Vanelli album in 79.  I think it had "I just want to Stop" on it. That's a masterpiece... and his voice was truly amazing. The rest of the album seemed like a bunch of session musicians going thru the motions.... but they we're so far ahead of me ... musically that I couldn't play the stuff.
 
Craig


Gino in the mid-80's was very different. More pop rock mix than the ballad/prog stuff he did earlier.

Regards,
Dan
2017/06/28 19:00:37
stevec
Nice one!   Poppy, yes, but still has a good rock edge.   I'm hearing something like a blend of .38 Special and 80's Heart.  
2017/06/28 22:50:13
CSW
Thanks Steve.
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