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  • The Drop Out Congretation -The Code
2017/06/23 21:32:48
Stevethesearcher2020
My new song "The Code" which I have been told sounds a bit like Depeche Mode.
 
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RiNQeip7QK8
 
Please like and comment on Youtube if you like the song.
 
I need the views and the comments.
 
Thanks
 
Steve
2017/06/23 22:39:30
eph221
liked this, concurred with the comp to DM.  You might want to mix up the rhythm and rhyme of the lyrics so that it's not always  predictable.  DM is really good with that, they'll surprise you with an off rhyme at just the right moment,.  Almost like a conversation.
2017/06/23 23:17:01
bjornpdx
Steve
I liked the synths on the backing tracks and I really liked the video.
The main track got a bit repetitive IMO but maybe that's the nature of the genre.
About halfway through I wanted to hear some changes in the lyrics and melody.  


2017/06/24 01:06:01
Stevethesearcher2020
Thanks for listening. Yes vocals could be better. I appreciate the feedback. I would probably remix this in future but this took ages to do. Totally solo effort. Everything by me but I would have preferred a guitarist
2017/06/24 01:09:41
Stevethesearcher2020
bjornpdx
Steve
I liked the synths on the backing tracks and I really liked the video.
The main track got a bit repetitive IMO but maybe that's the nature of the genre.
About halfway through I wanted to hear some changes in the lyrics and melody.  




Thanks for your feedback and for listening. Yes a bit more variation in later verses and choruses would have been better. I am definitely considering that in the future.
2017/06/24 01:14:10
Stevethesearcher2020
eph221
liked this, concurred with the comp to DM.  You might want to mix up the rhythm and rhyme of the lyrics so that it's not always  predictable.  DM is really good with that, they'll surprise you with an off rhyme at just the right moment,.  Almost like a conversation.


It does need more modern rhythm and a something extra but once again thanks for listening
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