bjornpdxSteveI liked the synths on the backing tracks and I really liked the video.The main track got a bit repetitive IMO but maybe that's the nature of the genre. About halfway through I wanted to hear some changes in the lyrics and melody.
eph221liked this, concurred with the comp to DM. You might want to mix up the rhythm and rhyme of the lyrics so that it's not always predictable. DM is really good with that, they'll surprise you with an off rhyme at just the right moment,. Almost like a conversation.