eph221
Kloon have you heard of dirty loops?  They're my favorite band right now.  The have a song called *hit me* which I imagine had similar origins.  :D:D  They're kind of Jamiroquai meets Leslie Uggams.
 
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nls1HtXQe8E

Never heard of them, this was quite groovy. :)
The lyrics have a dimension of weirdness to it, so i get your thoughts on similarities. ;)

Music sounds okay, I think this is Tony or Anthony/Findenzio perhaps? Don't blame God for your problems or use religion as an excuse to blame, you were given a life regardless of what you believe and what you do with it is up to you. Doesn't matter if you are writing for someone else, it's still your voice and to judge whoever you are writing or making music about is the same thing regardless of what religion or lack there of you may have, to judge anyone is wrong!
 
Just my opinions, no offense meant, take them for whatever you feel worthy of them. 
Cheers!
 

Serious_Noize!
Music sounds okay, I think this is Tony or Anthony/Findenzio perhaps? Don't blame God for your problems or use religion as an excuse to blame, you were given a life regardless of what you believe and what you do with it is up to you. Doesn't matter if you are writing for someone else, it's still your voice and to judge whoever you are writing or making music about is the same thing regardless of what religion or lack there of you may have, to judge anyone is wrong!
 
Just my opinions, no offense meant, take them for whatever you feel worthy of them. 
Cheers!
 

Are you serious?
My music is just fiction, i can write about any subject i want.
 
Think of it like a book, movie, story. Just fiction.
 

kloon

Serious_Noize!
Music sounds okay, I think this is Tony or Anthony/Findenzio perhaps? Don't blame God for your problems or use religion as an excuse to blame, you were given a life regardless of what you believe and what you do with it is up to you. Doesn't matter if you are writing for someone else, it's still your voice and to judge whoever you are writing or making music about is the same thing regardless of what religion or lack there of you may have, to judge anyone is wrong!
 
Just my opinions, no offense meant, take them for whatever you feel worthy of them. 
Cheers!
 

Are you serious?
My music is just fiction, i can write about any subject i want.
 
Think of it like a book, movie, story. Just fiction.
 

And I can give my opinion about anything I want also. 

Cheers
 

Serious_Noize!
 
And I can give my opinion about anything I want also. 

Hehe, yeah of course.
But it's one thing not liking my lyrics, and another trying to tell me what i can write about and not write about.

Very nice tune, recalls Depeche Mode or The Human League for me.  Well written and well put together.  There are points where the vocals sound a bit hot in the mix or could use some softening with verb or something...but I am no expert because I seem to struggle with those issues more than most.  
Thanks for sharing! -- c

cwestmont
Very nice tune, recalls Depeche Mode or The Human League for me.  Well written and well put together.  There are points where the vocals sound a bit hot in the mix or could use some softening with verb or something...but I am no expert because I seem to struggle with those issues more than most.  
Thanks for sharing! -- c

Thank you very much cwestmont for your feedback and kind words. :)

kloon

Serious_Noize!
 
And I can give my opinion about anything I want also. 

Hehe, yeah of course.
But it's one thing not liking my lyrics, and another trying to tell me what i can write about and not write about.

I never told you anything except my opinion. Sorry if you took it the wrong way. Apologies all around. 
I like the music and the vox, it's the content of the lyrics that I don't particularly care for, but that's me and my opinion. 
 
Keep on keepin' on! Enjoyed hearing this either way! 
 

Serious_Noize!
 
I never told you anything except my opinion. Sorry if you took it the wrong way. Apologies all around. 
I like the music and the vox, it's the content of the lyrics that I don't particularly care for, but that's me and my opinion. 
 
Keep on keepin' on! Enjoyed hearing this either way!

Thank you, I apologise as well if i overeacted.

kloon
A little bit gritty, very dark lyrics, but still very poppy.

Agreed
 
very danceable
 
I like the three demarcations.  each one could stand alone separately, interchangeable with one or another.
 
As far as the darkness, let me ask you; are you in a dark place or just imagining that?
 
I only ask because it will give credence if indeed you are in a dark space, or recently left a dark space, or are in a very bright place because it is dark, or visa versa.
 
Like it
 
Jesse Q. Screed