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  • Hit Me Hard (p.4)
2017/03/31 03:36:30
kloon
Jesse Screed
kloon
A little bit gritty, very dark lyrics, but still very poppy.



Agreed
 
very danceable
 
I like the three demarcations.  each one could stand alone separately, interchangeable with one or another.
 
As far as the darkness, let me ask you; are you in a dark place or just imagining that?
 
I only ask because it will give credence if indeed you are in a dark space, or recently left a dark space, or are in a very bright place because it is dark, or visa versa.
 
Like it
 
Jesse Q. Screed




Thank you very much Jesse!
I wouldnt say im in a particular dark place, just trying to write cool songs and keep things interesting.
I guess as english is not my first language, they are maybe a little bit less dramatic to me.
2017/04/08 06:13:00
SoundRegion
Love your arrangements. This is good. Comes off a little lite on the bass here.
2017/04/08 07:05:11
kloon
SoundRegion
Love your arrangements. This is good. Comes off a little lite on the bass here.




 
Thanks mate for listening and feedback!
Tons of things to keep in mind when arranging and mixing tracks. :)
2017/06/11 12:55:20
Midiboy
How have I missed this?  I just discovered this and listened to several of your tracks.  While the lyrics to this song are a bit dark, and I agree with what Serious Noize said (about not blaming God), but I really love your sound.  (Not telling you that you can't write what you want). 

With that being said, "Did You Miss Me" is my favorite of what you wrote.  Amazing tune.  
2017/06/11 13:07:43
kloon
Thank you very much Gregg!! :)
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