DeeringAmps
On my Bose cans the kick is solid, but the rest of the kit is a bit muddy.
Love the acoustic guitar work.
"The one from last night was from an older version of the project"
I hate when that happens!
The one thing we didn't have back in the tape days was a folder with a $hite load on different versions
File management, what a PITA; we all need an administrative assistant to handle the cue sheets...
T

Thanks for listening, Tom. 
Will go over the drums, and see if I can make'em all (-BD) sound a little better.
This was my first time recording my acoustic guitar in the room I'm in now. Thought it sounded quite good.
Edit: Mesh did the guitars in the transitions.
All the best.
 

dcumpian
Cool song, with lots of atmosphere!
 
My only comment about this mix is that the instruments create such a large sound wall that the vocals seem small in relation. If you can address that, I think this would be a much better mix.
 
Regards,
Dan
 
 

Thanks for the positive feedback, Dan.
Will see if I can do anything about the vocals.
All the best.

Funny thing about how Ken's project evolved was I initially only listened to this track and just added my 2 cents worth. The song really grew on me and I ended up jamming to it on my acoustic.......Ken heard the tidbits and was kind enough to include them. 
It was a quick and fun track to work on......thanks Ken!!

Mesh
Funny thing about how Ken's project evolved was I initially only listened to this track and just added my 2 cents worth. The song really grew on me and I ended up jamming to it on my acoustic.......Ken heard the tidbits and was kind enough to include them. 
It was a quick and fun track to work on......thanks Ken!!

Thanks for those "tidbits", Mesh
Needed those 

Cool stuff Ken and Mesh. 
Not sure what it is but in a very cool way it has a Spanish/Spaghetti Western feel to it  (maybe the chord changes). Would go well in a Robert Rodriguez movie.

daryl1968
Cool stuff Ken and Mesh. 
Not sure what it is but in a very cool way it has a Spanish/Spaghetti Western feel to it  (maybe the chord changes). Would go well in a Robert Rodriguez movie.

Thanks, Daryl.
Never thought of it like that 
All the best.

Very nice work Ken 'n' Mesh
 
Very much a ballad sounding sort of thing... Loving the vocals to this. It is a busy mix but I liked it

synkrotron
Very nice work Ken 'n' Mesh
 
Very much a ballad sounding sort of thing... Loving the vocals to this. It is a busy mix but I liked it

Thanks for listening, and the positive feedback, Andy.
In my mind, this is a ballad  
I'm trying to open the mix up a little..
All the best.

Listened to this when you first posted the mix sounded messy which struck me as not you or Mesh.

Not sure what remix this is but it sounds better than the first one.

Nice one...   Great vibe happening, slightly dark and cinematic.    If this is the closest you've come to writing a song, I think you need to write more songs.