I've uploaded a new mix after making some changes.
Changed the strings and choirs, edited the drums (more), ++.
Edit: Mesh thought I should mention that the bass were recorded using my Guitar Triller 

I made a few tweaks, and uploaded a new mix.

This is much better!  Now, the song has room to breath, and I can hear parts that were obscured before.  The drums don't get in the way and make sense, now, which lets your vocals be heard more plainly.  Congrats!

Zargg
 
Edit: Mesh thought I should mention that the bass were recorded using my Guitar Triller 

Yes I did.
 
Certainly a technique that's unusual and I think you did a great job with it. I'm sure it's not as easy as the videos show and probably needed a lot of practice. Personally I've never really used anything but a pick and fingers, so this is very interesting indeed.
 
Nice console  
 
 

Lynn
This is much better!  Now, the song has room to breath, and I can hear parts that were obscured before.  The drums don't get in the way and make sense, now, which lets your vocals be heard more plainly.  Congrats!

Thanks Lynn 

Mesh

Zargg
 
Edit: Mesh thought I should mention that the bass were recorded using my Guitar Triller 

Yes I did.
 
Certainly a technique that's unusual and I think you did a great job with it. I'm sure it's not as easy as the videos show and probably needed a lot of practice. Personally I've never really used anything but a pick and fingers, so this is very interesting indeed.
 
Nice console  
 
 

Thanks, buddy
I found the key to using it being where I hold my right hand.
I've found a place on my bass that feels comfy to play. But by no means any good with it.
I can play a few things, and not very well
I only bring out the console when I'm trying to impress 

New version is sooooooooooooooo much betterer.

bapu
New version is sooooooooooooooo much betterer.

Thank you, Baps 
I aim to betterer 

Criticism of the mix is still welcome 
 

Hear some vibes from Metallica and Scorpions, with some latin touch. Good work both of you! I didnt hear the earlier versions but this sounds mostly great. Maybe I would have put down the bass a tad in the softer parts but its a matter of taste. Nice song!