My April 2017 song is "Mr's Bad Guy". I wrote this song for several reasons. One of the inspirations was a coworker of mine that loved to vent about her husband. Another reason is the nagging that I was receiving one day form someone, that will remain nameless. That was the driving force I think.   I have four or five other reasons. 
 
https://www.reverbnation.com/silverbeat/song/27899385-mr-bad-guy
 
Cheers,
Terry
 
You wanna trade me in
For something that I do
For Every thing you say I don't
You treat my faults like sins
But we both know what's true
You want me to change - but you're sure I won't
All the love we shared has grown painfully worthless
If every day to come will be totally joyless                        
 
Chorus
 
I'm Mr. Bad Guy
Yeah a son of a devil
Who knows I Just may be the devil himself
Yeah I'm Mr. Bad Guy
Yeah I'm a pain of the highest level
I can put you through hell - like nobody else
I'm Mr. Bad Guy
 
You wanna Fill me in
With problems I can't see
For every time you cut me slack
You say that I can't win
You're sure that it's all me
You want me to change all the things I lack
All the love we shared has grown painfully worthless
If every day to come will be totally Joyless                         
 
Repeat chorus
 
Every time it rains you're sure that I'm the one to blame
Nothings gonna change, you know I'll Always be the same
 
Repeat chorus

Very very catchy from the get go. Kind of like the Partridge Family's bus got stuck in Sweden and recorded Euro-pop!
 
You might perhaps lower the snare volume, it's jumping right out at me.
 
fun tune!
-Tom

emeraldsoul
Very very catchy from the get go. Kind of like the Partridge Family's bus got stuck in Sweden and recorded Euro-pop!
 
You might perhaps lower the snare volume, it's jumping right out at me.
 
fun tune!
-Tom

Thank for the input. Not sure how I'm gonna fix that yet, but I'll give it a go

Yeah, good pop material.   Though for me, it sounds more like the Partridge Family in Sweden with a bit more attitude.