Not being a critic here, but I must say, I like the words to this tune, it's trippy, and the best way to describe it is a psychological test where social media and where their responses go you might say, or a musicians response. 
 
I like it, it's real sounding. But I must say before you feel out others you have to expose yourself first music wise. 
 
Enjoyed hearing this one!
 
 

The Zombie drags both legs, methinks.
 
I liked the low end pumping craziness. Even if David Bowie and Frank Zappa conceived a musician child, it wouldn't quite measure up to your stuff. IMHO
 
 

I dunno, Jesse, it doesn't sound very "silver" to me...  
 
Thick, wild and JQS unpredictable.