Apparently Ron from HotLixx liked it a couple of years ago! :)
I think I gave this a spin, and I dunno what I said then, but now I like it! It's hi-energy and I bet I compared it to REM.
I'd vote for vocal volume up a tad. If you go to somewhere like 1:50, I think the snare is just about as loud as the vocals, and they occupy a similar part of the spectrum.
I liked very much when you took it down to nothing, and then built it back up. Catchy.
good luck with it! in twenty years you can re-write it, how she's in love with your combover. :)
-Tom