a.k.a  at the persistence of your fear
 
http://www.soundclick.com...ngid=13563272&q=hi
 
does this mix sound ok to you?  I don't expect anyone to appreciate the song, but does the mix translate well?
 
jesse q. screed

This is nothing short of genius.  Lead vocal is way out front ,but I think it's only your sagacity at work, sometimes rover won't sit. Jesus may have cast satan into the pigs, but misbehaving dogs are legion.

This could be the mama of all Jesse bombs -- an explosion of sound -- and, the mix sounds good.  
 
Allan
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Jesse Screed
I don't expect anyone to appreciate the song

Appreciation in progress...
 

Certainly experimental but appreciate it we shall, good one.

Like it. Specifically like the first few measures. Nice and clean everywhere.

Sounds clear to me Jesse. 

ok...so just to the mix. Your vox and the tune seem to be on totally different planets as far as verb-space. For me when this happens it sounds cut and pasted. I'd try to add some verb to your vox making it appear they are in the same space to sound less imported. the music sits in a big universe and you're vox currently feels like it comes from edge of the bed in a small room.....not a good fit for my ears.
 
Lots of great stuff going on but I think a bit more work would help the sell...
 
Good job!