Okay Peeps... Here's a jolly one for you, and it is only three minutes long
 
I took an original track, created by one of my SoundCloud chums going by the name of Boson Spin. Full details of that, with links, are available in the track description.
 
The original track was somewhat shorter so I reckoned it could stand a dropping of the BMP, from 130 to 120. And I also added a few more bars of the original clip to the beginning, so the beat doesn't kick in as quickly as the original.
 
I added just two more synth tracks, to augment what was already there, which was pretty much a fleshed out idea to begin with.
 
I also did the usual and added a buss for Adaptiverb and another for Guitar Rig, which helped create additional "dreamy" qualities of the piece.
 
Still no verse/chorus/bridge and stuff...
 
Telesto
 
 cheers
 
andy

Nice rework of the original track, I enjoyed the listen.

How long 3 minuets this will never do Andy?!?!?!?
 
Nice

Wookiee
How long 3 minuets this will never do Andy?!?!?!?
 
Nice

It's the single version Wookster.
This could definitely take a vocal. Likes it.

biodiode
Nice rework of the original track, I enjoyed the listen.

Thanks Adrian. If you listened to the original then you get a better idea of what I brought to the party, so to speak
 
Thanks for listening. I'm glad you enjoyed it
 
cheers
 
andy

Wookiee
How long 3 minuets this will never do Andy?!?!?!?
 
Nice

 
Hiya Wookiee!
 
Thanks for listening
 
Yeah, three minutes is a tad short! I've done longer intro's
 
 
cheers
 
andy

daryl1968
It's the single version Wookster.
This could definitely take a vocal. Likes it.

Haha! Cheers Daryl! And thanks for having a listen to my little re-work
 
 

Andy
Another one of your tracks that sends me floating away. Nice one!

This is just plain good.
 
-Tom

Now last time I made some comments here I got into trouble.  I have made a good friend from that experience though and very happy because of it. But Andy and I have conversed before. Firstly I love electronic music so I am into it from the very start.
 
My only criticism is that for me it is 3 minutes long and goes nowhere. That whole sound is really only good for 8 or 16 bars as an intro but I would take it somewhere else. The sound of that idea is great but the current arrangement is weak. 
 
Listen to the master e.g. Tangerine Dream. Edgar would do a lovely sound like that but only for the intro though. After 16 bars or so he would be into something else and developing something much stronger. New sections, chord changes and melodies. 
 
I love this too but I can already hear in my mind where it should go. Funny thing about TD is that it can sound like its on the same idea for a long time but in fact it is not. It is constantly moving and developing underneath.
 
But as it is it is also a lovely piece to relax too and just veg out on for sure!