Hey FEC,
very well thought out piece
understated
nothing without the other
@1:30, I want to hear a more natural vocal, but that is just me, less verb me thinks, or whatever you did there.
here is a brainstorm, copy the vocals at :26, and paste them @ 2:09, try it, you might like it.
copy the vocals at 1:29, and paste them @ 2:30, but then I heard @ 2:;50, so maybe slide that to 2:30.
I don't ussually make comments on arrangments or mixes, and I don't know why I just did,
I like your song
Jesse Q. Screed