Hi. I made a new tune for which I  made a new verse for. I hope you like it
P.S. I don't know which style my tune is but I label it pop
 
 
https://soundcloud.com/madrigal7/falling-up-1
 

Hi. I made a couple of changes to the tune which is now ready. I hope you like it. Comments are welcome
 
https://soundcloud.com/madrigal7/falling-up-1

Very nice kakku. Smooth chord progression good melody development. I like the change up in lead instruments and the dynamic pauses. My only crit: The drum track could use a little more variation (fills, accents, etc.). Solid mix and production...thumbs up....Ron

Sounds good on my Alexa, streaming from my laptop.
 
Personally, I didn't connect with it. It's almost like a homeopathic song in that it has traces of other ideas, which are distantly connected to this one but none of the movements, except for the opening really caught my attention. You have a nice use and range of instruments but I really felt that that the song lacked groove in the drums and bass and thus a lot of the melodical movements were hard to hold on to.

Nice arrangement and selection of sounds Kakku

Very nice Kakku. I really like the horn sound in the first 'verse'. Nice changes throughout to keep it interesting.

savageopera
Very nice kakku. Smooth chord progression good melody development. I like the change up in lead instruments and the dynamic pauses. My only crit: The drum track could use a little more variation (fills, accents, etc.). Solid mix and production...thumbs up....Ron

Thank you Ron. I agree about the drums. I have problems finding good drum sounds for fills etc.

ruralrocker2010
Sounds good on my Alexa, streaming from my laptop.
 
Personally, I didn't connect with it. It's almost like a homeopathic song in that it has traces of other ideas, which are distantly connected to this one but none of the movements, except for the opening really caught my attention. You have a nice use and range of instruments but I really felt that that the song lacked groove in the drums and bass and thus a lot of the melodical movements were hard to hold on to.

Thank you for your comment. I admit that there are a lot flaws on it.

synkrotron
Nice arrangement and selection of sounds Kakku

Thank you synkrotron

daryl1968
Very nice Kakku. I really like the horn sound in the first 'verse'. Nice changes throughout to keep it interesting.

Thank you Daryl.