https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nIDLTzQgEnM&t=13s
 
This is a collaboration I did with a local chap here in South Florida. (first collaboration in Sonar, we have quite a few more in the hopper)  He did some of the raw tracks in Music creator and the I worked on them in Platinum.  Worked quite well really.
 
The video is kind of all over the place, but we had a lot of fun making it.  There is a lot of really weird B&W public domain stuff out there!
 
Thanks 
 
JR
 
 

You've got an interesting song here. I think how your parts are arranged is pretty cool, the arrangement never gets boring. 
 
I watched the video, and then for fun, just listened to the audio - and to be honest, I really enjoyed "audio only" a lot more. I think the video you've got kind of detracts from the musicality of your song. Sorry, and believe me, I know it's fun to get a video together! 
 
I think your lyrics are more modern, and your video is one old clip after another. Maybe re-edit in some modern vidiage and that might connect the song to the video more? I dunno, YMMV.
 
cool tune, though.
 
cheers,
-Tom

Thanks Tom...
 
I agree that the video is a bit out of step with the music.  Our first crack at it and hope to get better.
 
Thanks for the listen.

Nice song and arrangement, nothing jumps out at me regarding the mixing. I agree with Tom that the video seems out of stop with the song, audio only = definitely better.
 
Enjoyed the listen,
Adrian

Very cool song and arrangement - really keeps your attention.