Hi,
Good fun listening to this tune And by the way thanks a lot for typing the lyrics it is a great help for.. foreigners.
Well you american people have a way to write songs that tells me you have that in your veins ,as if songwriting was as natural as... playing golf... No ,no sorry ,I wont do it again.
Well anyway good blues rock song with ( for me) special mention for the lyrics.
Cheers.
Olivier

stevesweat
Sounds real nice. If I had to give a crit I would personally start with more organic instrumentation at the beginning and build with the more exciting, synth-y sounds that now start the song, coming in later to kick it up a notch at a time. A plainer start to the song then the lack of self control being characterized by the new sounds being added. Just my take right now, I'm trying to comment more...

Steve, thanks for the listen and for your comments.

Nice stuff Phil!  I've heard this one before with you singing.  I like this version - not saying your vox were bad, but this is an "upgrade"
 
I would consider replacing the synthy stuff with some pedal or slide.  this song has "country" written all over it, IMO, but the instrumentation is not always representative of that.
 
danny's and ed's parts are great and they fit there.  it's just the synthy part that could use some change, IMO
 
make it more like Lynrd Skynyrd and this would be a huge hit, IMO.
 
just my 2 cents.

Phil,
I totally enjoyed the tune. Yes, an interesting combo of instruments. The mix sounded fine. The voc sounded a wee bit loud overall but I think it was because of the small Bluetooth JBL Flip speaker I'm using (I'm at lunch). Great work.

Great job, Phil and company!  This reminds me of a local KC band, the Rainmakers.  I have no crits and commend you all.  You are one of my favorite lyricist.  Keep em comin.

Yeah, that sounds good.  
 
I like the mix of synths and typical blues/rock instrumentation.  Cool blend.  And Greg's slight twang works great.   I also liked Danny's fills/leads over top - just enough. 

geeare1
Sounds great! No crits here, I'm just enjoying the tune!

Thanks, Gary... appreciate it.

daryl1968
Very cool Phil. Great mix

Thanks, Daryl... much appreciated.

Cool song! A lot of melded styles heard in there.

daryl1968
Very cool Phil. Great mix

Thanks, Daryl.