Thanks, Leizer, I appreciate it! I agree the instrumental version needs sumpin . . .
 
 
 
 
cheers,
-Tom

Nice groove and melody lines... good arrangement and sounds

Thanks, Makke! Much obliged.

I really liked this.
Great music, love the panning of the "bongos"!?
Video is great, and very relevant.

Great instrumentation!

Hi Tom ,
I started first with the video . Little did I know that I was setting myself up ....
When I saw the flock of sheep walking down the road I started laughing because I had jokingly said to myself
"hey there goes my EX " . I  was not prepared for the onslaught of Cameo appearances that were soon to follow 
All joking aside I did enjoy your video once I regained my composure and got back on track ....
Yeah , pretty creative , I like the spoken word mixed w visuals ...
Then I went and gave your SoundCloud music only version a listen ...
Nice very different vibe ...
I enjoyed listening to it as a tune ...so much different than what I do I found it to be a refreshing pleasure to listen too...
 
Kenny
 
 

Nice work on the video Tom... I see you are still having lots of fun with the creation process
 
Cool tune. If pushed, I think I'd side with the peeps that liked the spoken word version.
 
 
cheers
 
andy

Thanks Andy, the video was fun. Still learning!
 
Thanks, Kenny, I hope it wasn't your girlfriend (that was funny!) 'cause I didn't have her sign a release . . .
 
Twisted6, many thanks!
 
Kloon, yes, relevant unfortunately. Thanks for the listen!
 
 
cheers,
-Tom

emeraldsoul
 
 
Thanks, Kenny, I hope it wasn't your girlfriend (that was funny!) 'cause I didn't have her sign a release . . .
 
 
cheers,
-Tom

 
Hi Tom , she really wasn't my girlfriend but if things keep going the way they are she might as well be
 
Kenny

Tom, I only listened to the spoken word version.  I loved it!  this is really great!  love the synths, the piano, the mix, the performances - all great stuff!