https://soundcloud.com/cris_camp/fever ... just finished this little track .. kind of old school techno i guess ..mixing is not the greatest as i had a hard time to make the piano to sit well without interfering with the bass and drums ... Enjoy! 

I don't know too much about this music. I see what you mean about the piano, but it didn't really sound too odd to my ears. I wanted more movement in the melody of the lead instrument - feel like you have a lot of room to explore height and width and create almost a surreal surround environment, but I (again) don't know how this music should go.
 
 

I'm picturing in my mind a strobe light thing going on with this.  Almost hypnotic.  I like your use of the various sounds as if to form a musical color pallette.
 
John B.

yes
my heart races
solid grounds
light fantastic
sweat to the permeation
osmosis of love
writhe
yes
dance
like star sparks
trip the slit
 
drive
drive
reach!!
 
back off slowly
 
and
with one last effort
 
pump the drive
 
and fall into the flower garden
where nothing is heard
cept
two lovers loving.
 
ScQJessEd

What Jesse said, plus, I think the mix could do with just a hair less kick. I know it's supposed to be prominent but it's kind of pushing out the bass synth. I liked the middle section with the kick removed, I can hear the mix a lot better.
 
No help, probably, but I don't think you really need much help, you are a good mixer and this is way listenable.
 
cheers,
-Tom