Hey there!
Yeah, the effects of aging. Always fun.
Great mix and creative in so many ways! Love whatever effects you're doing on your voice. I would only suggest a hair more pitch correction on some of your longer notes.
Am I thinking some Pink Floyd is in your soul?
The snare is the only thing I think isn't cutting. It's there, but when I do the old 'TURN EVERYTHING DOWN TO ITS LOWEST AUDIBLE STATE' I should be hearing both your voice and the snare ONLY. So that's how I know the snare could come up a bit. That's how I check my snare levels against the voice. A friend of mine who died of cancer at 49 taught me that one. Never forgotten that advice.
Hi hat. Down a tad. Maybe ad a humanize filter to the midi. Randomize CAL will do it in SONAR.
Good introspective piece. Dig your voice. Keep up the creative work.
Martin