Here's our latest song called "Lord, Jesus"
 
Beagle: lead vox, piano, drum programming, mix
Mike Hansen: BGVs, Bass, Electric Rhythm, Electric Lead
Sean Peifer: BGVs, Elec Rhythm Guitars
 
All comments are welcome!
 
https://soundcloud.com/beaglesound/lord-jesus
 

I'm not crazy about the low vocals in the verses...  I'd be tempted to Melodyne them a bit, maybe double/triple track them, or even try doubling with a higher falsetto part?  But they do kick in nicely for the rest of the tune, much stronger.   Also, the lower harmony on the post-chorus Allelujahs sounds a little flat (I think) or maybe it's the way the notes blend with the main line. The higher part sounds pretty good with it.
 
Vocals aside, the mix seems to work for the genre. 
 
Edit: I meant to add...  that is a catchy chorus.  I think it was still going through my head about ten minutes later.  

Good song - specially the chorus - love the harmonies.
The verse vocal is too quiet.

Steve - thanks! high praise indeed when the hook keeps you hooked for a while after the song!  the guys and I are discussing some changes based on your and dayrl's comments.  thanks so much!
 
daryl - thanks glad you liked it!  working on some possible changes to the verse based on yours and steve's comments.  thanks guys!

My first impression of the vocal was Oh! wrong key?, but then it sounds right for the chorus but what would I know.

Mix seems OK other than the low vocal in the verse, which to me also sounds a little dry, again what would I know.

Nice song guys. I kind of feel the same about the verse vocal as Steve.
 
Chorus is the stuff.

Seems you're getting a consensus here, the chorus really lifts off but the verses aren't living up to it.

Nice Overall Energy , a couple of things as mentioned need a little TLC .
I certainly like when the vocals are being belted out ...also enjoyed the  bands musical change up at around 2:36
I wasn't expecting that musical transition  . It was like a Yin & Yang thing . I thought it fit the song well
 
all the best,
 
Kenny

Hi Reece! Hope all is good with you and Beverly. 
 
I commented on your new work here on the Soundcloud page - hope you got it. Great worship number. Going to use it in church, I hope?  :-)
 
PM me here - am off FB until I get to where I need to be, artistically speaking. That stupid thing is a time-sucking pig for me. It's not that I have ADD, it's just that I'm too easily fascinated by bl--dy everything!  Okay, I have ADD. Whatevs...
 
Later!  
Martin

As a song the arrangement and tune are well conceived. However, like others have said I would certainly look at the tuning of the vocals in the verses as there's something not quite write there.