The best thing about this song is the honesty.
I can tell that you are a person of introspection, and I think that is a good thing. Reflection is good.
Sure, there a things you might do to tweak it, but for raw truth, and concrete realization, you nailed it.
It is you,
I say, one of the best tunes I have heard on the forum... ever. I mean that too.
naked soul exposed for the willing
Everything's going to be alright, you're moving in the affirmative direction.
Jesse Q. Screed