Hello everybody
 
A friend of mine and I recorded our first song. It´s german language and the song is about a voyage through space.
 
I hope you guys like it and I would be happy to hear your opinion on this song. Meanwhile, I heard this song so many times, it´s hard for me to have an "objective look" on the song.
 
So, thanks in advance for  your help. :-)
 
https://soundcloud.com/to...r-dich-nicht-toeericht
 
 

this is a great idea and presented well.  I think the melody on the verse should be re-thought to be a little more compelling.  Maybe some dynamics and bigger range for the voice.  It needs to contrast more with the chorus.
 
 

Andy, I really enjoyed this tune.  I don't agree with David about the melody, in fact, that was what drew me into this song.  I think the melody breaks down the language barrier, but I liked the rest of the song, too.  Keep up the good work.

I like listening to songs in different languages, it's like it's a litmus test - is it still a good musical song if you can't understand the words? 
 
yours is, in my opinion.
 
Something's not going well for them up there. Ground Control to Major Hans.
 
 
cheers,
-Tom
 
 

Hey guys,
 
wow, I am truly overwhelmed from your feedback. Thank you <3!

Nice work Andy... Can't understand a word, but it didn't detract from the enjoyable uplifting pop/rock vibe you got going here.
 
 
cheers
 
andy

Ditto... can't understand a word, but that didn't matter.   Just an enjoyable straight-forward pop/rock song.

Again: thank´s everybody for your support. It´s really appreciated <3