I was just fooling around. This is what I have come up with. I might write words and "dress it up" a little more later.
So this is just a short idea that I might turn into a full song. If it's worth it.
Thanks for listening!
 
Opinions are welcome!
 
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Worked a little bit on the idea. This is where I am now with the song.
Please listen to it till the end and let me know what you think: should I write words to it or make it instrumental?
Please share opinions.
Thanks.
 
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Use speakers not headphones!

I'm a rebel so I listened on headphones. I think it's got a Satriani-like instrumental potential. Could use a wailing lead of some sort.
 
I don't hear your arrangement as traditional verse verse / chorus / verse / chorus so you might have some trouble lining up the lyrics. Or not.
 
It's a really cool set of riffs and I'd like to hear where it's going. Probably could look at a drum fill now and again. Sweet guitar playing.
 
cheers,
-Tom