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  • That's what she said (p.2)
3/5/2017
synkrotron
Hi Steen,
 
I am currently listening to the final mix.
 
On the whole, I think you should be proud of what you have done here. You say, "it's not going to get any better," but I disagree a little... Okay, leave this one where it is, and then apply what you have learned on your next project.
 
To be honest, I think you have a fine song at the end there. You have a good voice too...
 
cheers
 
andy
3/5/2017
SoundRegion
Midiboy
Your link on top of the page takes you to a song called Nomansland.

Now that I found this link, I'm listening to this also.

I like this song quite a bit.  The lyrics are "real" and are really well done.  I like the vocals quite a bit.  They remind me of some 80s post punk groups like The Alarm.  I love the simplicity of the instrumentation, including the drums.  To me, to have anything more going on would detract from the song itself.  

My only crit (and I know you said it's the final mix and it's not going to get any better), you can hear extra vocal noises like lip smacks and breaths between some of the lines and especially at the beginning before the vocals start.  If it's not too late, I'd go in and try to edit those out.  

Honestly, that's my only crit.  As for the song writing and instrumentation, I absolutely am in love with this song.  It's like my life before I got married.  I can definitely relate to the lyrics. 
 


Thanks for your input Gregg. I appreciate it.
Link has been changed. I didn't notice the noises. I moved away from headphones for mixing, which I probably why I didn't notice.
Simplicity seems to be the thing theses day if you listen to the popular songs on the radio. Far from Spector.
synkrotron
Hi Steen,
 
I am currently listening to the final mix.
 
On the whole, I think you should be proud of what you have done here. You say, "it's not going to get any better," but I disagree a little... Okay, leave this one where it is, and then apply what you have learned on your next project.
 
To be honest, I think you have a fine song at the end there. You have a good voice too...
 
cheers
 
andy


Thank a lot Andy. I really appreciate it.
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