Yes your main vocal seems to have a ton of authenticity to it. In the beginning of the tune it's mixed in much lower than the guitars, so maybe boost the voc a little there? Really, whenever it's a whispering vocal, it's pretty quiet relative to the acoustics.
I liked the lyrics, too! Great delivery as well.
The bass has got an issue somewhere, it's not super bad as it is, but maybe something is mashing or clipping? Did you use a limiter on the bass guitar? If so, how does it look?
The thing that really is getting me is your voice - I think you might sound like somebody kinda but I can't place it. Roger Waters maybe? No matter, nice voice.
cool job.
cheers,
-Tom