You use pauses and silence well. Nice use of your complete palette of dynamics. Were you intentionally going for synth sounds? If so this is fine as it is. If you wanted to translate to a more monumental sound with a real orchestra (some of the brass for instance) it would sound fantastic scored for an orchestra (or orchestral samples).
Also, you could add a little variation in the piano velocities unless you wanted a more straight-ahead invention-like sound. It all comes down to what your intentions are versus how it comes across.