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  • My Instrumental: The Delimma
2017/01/29 19:45:24
Tim Flannagin
For your consideration and comment
https://soundcloud.com/user-660553900/the-delimma
2017/01/29 20:44:14
eph221
I warmed up to it slowly, but by 1:09 I was into it.  Neat sounding piece.
2017/01/30 07:29:16
Tim Flannagin
Thanks David! I appreciate you giving it a listen.
2017/01/30 08:06:41
jamesg1213
I like it, got a nice vibe to it. I like the look of that Les Paul too!
2017/01/30 08:40:06
stevesweat
Sounds great! (Dilemma)
2017/01/30 08:41:42
dcumpian
I'd like to hear a stronger melody over the top of this, but it is excellent! Really nice tones and instruments.
 
Regards,
Dan
2017/01/30 10:19:50
biodiode
I'm with Dan on this, there is certainly room for another melody line, nothing too busy mind. But you have crafted a really nice piece of music that has been well recorded and mixed.
2017/01/30 11:00:30
Tim Flannagin
Thanks all for the comments. @ Dan and Adrian, I tried several things with regard to another melody line, but felt that it came off sounding too busy. As a result, I went with the "less is more" philosophy this time. @ James, I've had that Les Paul since I was 16. It's a 1977 Gibson Les Paul Artisan. Of all the guitars I've had, it's still my favorite.
2017/02/02 15:25:40
stevec
I really liked that...   While I could also hear a relatively simple vocal line (or lead melodic instrument) riding over top, I don't know that I'd change anything as it is - I think the arrangement + mix are great together. 
2017/02/03 08:22:40
Tim Flannagin
Thanks Steve. I appreciate you giving it a listen.
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