Late to the party...    Nice song, Lynn!   Like others I'm getting a Floyd vibe without it actually sounding like Floyd.  Just a cool vibe throughout.    I don't know that I'd personally change a whole lot, other than adding some verb/delay to the vocals, and maybe a bit of chorus/flange in isolated spots just for effect.   OK, and maybe a little strings during the end section just as a bit of "lift". 
 

stevec
Late to the party...    Nice song, Lynn!   Like others I'm getting a Floyd vibe without it actually sounding like Floyd.  Just a cool vibe throughout.    I don't know that I'd personally change a whole lot, other than adding some verb/delay to the vocals, and maybe a bit of chorus/flange in isolated spots just for effect.   OK, and maybe a little strings during the end section just as a bit of "lift". 
 

Steve, thanks for giving this a listen.  I've been without computer for the last week or I would have responded sooner.  I don't know which version you listened to, but the video has the latest mix.  As always, I appreciate your insights, and you never fail to help me see things in a new light.  Have a safe and happy holiday.

Further to my comment above, I love the video. Makes me wish I was forty years younger! Have a great Christmas.

lylemusic
Further to my comment above, I love the video. Makes me wish I was forty years younger! Have a great Christmas.

Thank you, Malcolm.  I wouldn't mind being 40 years younger, myself, just not in 2016 ;)

Really nice song, Lynn.  I like the chord changes and the way it builds.  Good strong chorus.  Looks like you got yourself a winner.

Excellent video Lynn.  I'm going to have to look into Videoblock!

Phil and Freddy, thanks so much for your kind words.  Phil, your latest video is kind of a gold standard for me these days.  Freddy, you can get 20 free video clips per day for one week in trial mode.  I did one complete video this way.  This time I ponied up for a one year subscription for $49, which was well worth it for this vid.

Lynn

stevec
Late to the party...    Nice song, Lynn!   Like others I'm getting a Floyd vibe without it actually sounding like Floyd.  Just a cool vibe throughout.    I don't know that I'd personally change a whole lot, other than adding some verb/delay to the vocals, and maybe a bit of chorus/flange in isolated spots just for effect.   OK, and maybe a little strings during the end section just as a bit of "lift". 
 

Steve, thanks for giving this a listen.  I've been without computer for the last week or I would have responded sooner.  I don't know which version you listened to, but the video has the latest mix.  As always, I appreciate your insights, and you never fail to help me see things in a new light.  Have a safe and happy holiday.

Just had a listen to the YouTube version... yeah, I think the vocals have more "space" around them now?  It's subtle, but I'm pretty sure I hear just enough effect to carry over from the end of each line.   Oh, and I liked the ending. 

Steve, thanks for taking another listen.  With this production, I tried to follow the less-is-more philosophy.

Lynn - excellent!  love the dreamy guitar!  great song!
 
I'm going to have to look into videoblock - that's cool!