eph221
Why don't you write some lyrics?
I ask myself that all the time. I overthink them... I think. I listen to stuff like Soul Coughing and wonder, why can't I just string a bunch on nonsensical words together like that? Or Primus and wonder, why not make up a story about some fictional character?
I'll keep the idea open for sure, this tune is pretty well structured for lyrics. It stands alright on its own, but I agree that lyrics could make it really good for a much broader audience.