Freddie, gswitz and daryl, sound like the revised production has worked.
What am I waiting for? For a song like this I believe analogue micing in the same room with the diverse vocal members of the band will take this a lot closer to the feel of a real song. Production wise the song is 90% there, but there is something about having everything done organically that adds that last few % in my opinion.
Thanks Guys, if I have a revision with the new members I will post it up
Cian